Sunday, November 14, 2004
lauren's draft
just playing with this right now, but here's the first draft minus a few stanzas yet to be written....(cut me some slack, I wrote it sitting in the hookah bar surrounded by strange new-agers and bad music...
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"imago"
imagining you
on clean sanded beaches
salt winds whipped to frenzy,
blonde lock essence
on salt winds
at best imagination,
if only imagination,
lemon flavored, intense
flowing estimated glory,
ascertained turn away-kisses
dropped water murmurs,
slow-breathing sleep
next to imagination
salt winded blonde
imagined waking laughter
clean hand mastery
shallow close breath
answered figure dancers sway
waking in salt breeze
sweet laughter
carried on salt winds
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ok, that's all i have right now, but there will be a new draft sooner or later here....leave a post, tell the world what you saw on teh brown couch...
cf
ps - everything I said about Joe Henry is also true about Bruce Cockburn. Thanks Canada!
cf
-------
"imago"
imagining you
on clean sanded beaches
salt winds whipped to frenzy,
blonde lock essence
on salt winds
at best imagination,
if only imagination,
lemon flavored, intense
flowing estimated glory,
ascertained turn away-kisses
dropped water murmurs,
slow-breathing sleep
next to imagination
salt winded blonde
imagined waking laughter
clean hand mastery
shallow close breath
answered figure dancers sway
waking in salt breeze
sweet laughter
carried on salt winds
------
ok, that's all i have right now, but there will be a new draft sooner or later here....leave a post, tell the world what you saw on teh brown couch...
cf
ps - everything I said about Joe Henry is also true about Bruce Cockburn. Thanks Canada!
cf
